This is so beautiful. I like it a lot! Beautiful, beautiful job.

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Wow, nice expression of feelings and words you've got here. I can really relate to it This is really promising. Keep it up. Try checking out my works whenever you've got time.

wowthis is really deepyou have good diction

beautiful.. the colors part was especially amazing.. i like descriptions too and the ending.. awesome job

sad, but breath-taking. the imagery is so beautiful. keep on going!

That was soo incredibly beautiful and awe inspiring. Beautiful, beautiful piece.

lovely...you really are very good at poems

Wow, that's gorgeous. Really really lovely.

Beautiful ending. Keep writing!

This has simply gorgeous imagery. Love it.

so beautiful...love "surfing the dust drops" and last stanza

absolutely beautiful imagery, nice writing. i loved the first verse. wonderful work.

"surfing the dust drops", is a wonderful line. This really jumps out with color and feeling. It flows to the point of overflowing which is excellent because the work almost doesn't contain all the images used. This is a really great poem, well written and bursting with so much well placed emotion.

Amazing poem. The imagery was so beautiful. I loved the dreamy emotion throughout. Excellent job. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)

P.S. Thank you for your nice review!

simply beautiful...keep up the good work!

this was so beautiful, so incredible. each word practically fell out of heaven, it was all so perfect. honestly. amazing. i can't even pick cerain lines that i loved the most; it was all incredible.