| Reviews for Milk Petal Stars |
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Black and White Dreams 6/17/06 . chapter 1 This is so beautiful. I like it a lot! Beautiful, beautiful job. Black and White Dreams |
Leo Eigenmann 6/2/06 . chapter 1Wow, nice expression of feelings and words you've got here. I can really relate to it This is really promising. Keep it up. Try checking out my works whenever you've got time. |
Thyrt 3/9/06 . chapter 1wowthis is really deepyou have good diction |
simpleplan13 1/27/06 . chapter 1beautiful.. the colors part was especially amazing.. i like descriptions too and the ending.. awesome job |
breezy nostrils 1/21/06 . chapter 1sad, but breath-taking. the imagery is so beautiful. keep on going! |
from beneath the bell jar 1/15/06 . chapter 1That was soo incredibly beautiful and awe inspiring. Beautiful, beautiful piece. |
strummychick 1/13/06 . chapter 1lovely...you really are very good at poems |
Plinky 1/11/06 . chapter 1Wow, that's gorgeous. Really really lovely. Beautiful ending. Keep writing! |
none of burt's beeswax 1/9/06 . chapter 1This has simply gorgeous imagery. Love it. |
Choke on this 1/6/06 . chapter 1so beautiful...love "surfing the dust drops" and last stanza |
frayedlifeforce 1/5/06 . chapter 1absolutely beautiful imagery, nice writing. i loved the first verse. wonderful work. |
Moondog Dozier 1/3/06 . chapter 1"surfing the dust drops", is a wonderful line. This really jumps out with color and feeling. It flows to the point of overflowing which is excellent because the work almost doesn't contain all the images used. This is a really great poem, well written and bursting with so much well placed emotion. |
Searching4Truth 1/2/06 . chapter 1Amazing poem. The imagery was so beautiful. I loved the dreamy emotion throughout. Excellent job. Keep writing, you're really good! :-) P.S. Thank you for your nice review! |
cornered.sensations 1/2/06 . chapter 1simply beautiful...keep up the good work! |
a lonely september 1/1/06 . chapter 1this was so beautiful, so incredible. each word practically fell out of heaven, it was all so perfect. honestly. amazing. i can't even pick cerain lines that i loved the most; it was all incredible. |