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Black and White Dreams 2006-06-17 . chapter 1
This is so beautiful. I like it a lot! Beautiful, beautiful job.

~Black and White Dreams~
Piety Pablo 2006-06-02 . chapter 1
Wow, nice expression of feelings and words you've got here. I can really relate to it This is really promising. Keep it up. Try checking out my works whenever you've got time.
Thyrt 2006-03-09 . chapter 1
wowthis is really deepyou have good diction
simpleplan13 2006-01-27 . chapter 1
beautiful.. the colors part was especially amazing.. i like descriptions too and the ending.. awesome job
breezy nostrils 2006-01-21 . chapter 1
sad, but breath-taking. the imagery is so beautiful. keep on going!
from beneath the bell jar 2006-01-15 . chapter 1
That was soo incredibly beautiful and awe inspiring. Beautiful, beautiful piece.
strummychick 2006-01-13 . chapter 1
lovely...you really are very good at poems
Plinky 2006-01-11 . chapter 1
Wow, that's gorgeous. Really really lovely.

Beautiful ending. Keep writing!
none of burt's beeswax 2006-01-09 . chapter 1
This has simply gorgeous imagery. Love it.
Choke on this 2006-01-06 . chapter 1
so beautiful...love "surfing the dust drops" and last stanza
frayedlifeforce 2006-01-05 . chapter 1
absolutely beautiful imagery, nice writing. i loved the first verse. wonderful work.
Moondog Dozier 2006-01-03 . chapter 1
"surfing the dust drops", is a wonderful line. This really jumps out with color and feeling. It flows to the point of overflowing which is excellent because the work almost doesn't contain all the images used. This is a really great poem, well written and bursting with so much well placed emotion.
Searching4Truth 2006-01-02 . chapter 1
Amazing poem. The imagery was so beautiful. I loved the dreamy emotion throughout. Excellent job. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)

P.S. Thank you for your nice review!
cornered.sensations 2006-01-02 . chapter 1
simply beautiful...keep up the good work!
a lonely september 2006-01-01 . chapter 1
this was so beautiful, so incredible. each word practically fell out of heaven, it was all so perfect. honestly. amazing. i can't even pick cerain lines that i loved the most; it was all incredible.
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