The Gobbler
2006-01-01
ch 1,  | abuseWhoo, creepy! Hehe this is awesome I was just kinda confused when Rachel was talking... you said, "...She talks..." and then later on you clarified it. Oh but I liked the Church thing, how they could pick, and I liked the ending so much. Twas perfect! Hehe and his Aunt and Uncle are so evil... they're great villains. ANd the comment about the crimson stain on the driveway was good, too--it showed their personalities. Anywho, awesome job chica! You needa update Blood Symphony! |
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