| Reviews for Going For a Drive |
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Nobody-n-Particular 6/23/06 . chapter 1This is my favorite so far. Such wonderful diction. But maybe a correction in the following: "No, not holes in the road,small ponds" If I understand your meaning correctly, maybe add a "but" in front of "small ponds" That is all and a wonderful read. |
Shadowhound 1/5/06 . chapter 1...never drive with old people. interesting poem, i really like you description. Shadowhound |
Affinity 12/29/05 . chapter 1Very nice, I like your style, it's like reading a story and poetry. Great imagery! -Thanks for the review!- |