|Reviews for Going For a Drive|
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/23/06 . chapter 1
This is my favorite so far. Such wonderful diction. But maybe a correction in the following:
"No, not holes in the road,small ponds"
If I understand your meaning correctly, maybe add a "but" in front of "small ponds"
That is all and a wonderful read.
| Shadowhound 1/5/06 . chapter 1
...never drive with old people. interesting poem, i really like you description.
| Affinity 12/29/05 . chapter 1
Very nice, I like your style, it's like reading a story and poetry. Great imagery!
-Thanks for the review!-