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Nobody-n-Particular
2006-06-23
ch 1,
abuseThis is my favorite so far. Such wonderful diction. But maybe a correction in the following:

"No, not holes in the road,small ponds"

If I understand your meaning correctly, maybe add a "but" in front of "small ponds"

That is all and a wonderful read.
Shadowhound
2006-01-05
ch 1,
abuse...never drive with old people. interesting poem, i really like you description.

Shadowhound
Affinity
2005-12-29
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, I like your style, it's like reading a story and poetry. Great imagery!

-Thanks for the review!-
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