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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is my favorite so far. Such wonderful diction. But maybe a correction in the following: "No, not holes in the road,small ponds" If I understand your meaning correctly, maybe add a "but" in front of "small ponds" That is all and a wonderful read. |
| Shadowhound 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuse...never drive with old people. interesting poem, i really like you description. Shadowhound |
| Affinity 2005-12-29 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, I like your style, it's like reading a story and poetry. Great imagery! -Thanks for the review!- |