I don't like Adrian :o that's okay, right? That I don't think of him as very nice? Especially not to his SON?
Anywho, guess if I was surprised to see that this story is set in Sweden! XP I'm a swede myslef so... It was fun, it's rare to see stories on the net that is set here :P
To be truthful the biggest reason I read through all of this story was because it was set in Sweden and that I though that Alex is quite the cutie.
I had a hard time following it at moments, it was a bit hazy.
I liked the plot though, and Alex reactions to what happened in the story, every time he reacted in what I thought a bit odd got explained when we got to know that he was sexually abused by his father.
I had a harder time understanding Kain though. He was a bit... I don't really know, aloof maybe? He felt a bit distant to me.

That was awesome!! Thanx

The descriptions you put into the story gave it a very realistic and rich imagery, which was nice to read. But, I feel that the characters could be given a more realistic touch..and an emphasis on their feelings was missing. A lot of times, for girls, it is about emotions..and for boys it is about physical attraction - it was not evident which one (or both) it was...also, the development of their relationship was in fits and starts.

But, whatever..it had an even plot, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it..!

Ok.. Since it's thwe last chapter and I'm an idiot.. I need you to answer some things for me..

Is he in love with his father or is he being raped by his father?

Will there be a sequel or is it the end, end?

I'm not sure what I think about this story.. It's well written and all that but I don't know what I think about a relationship between Father and son..I think I feel that it's wrong..

Anyway.. Great work..

/S

ps. The names and stuff seem swedish.. Karin at least and örebro.. Are you from sweden?? ds.

If his hobbies are girls.. what the f*ck is he doing with Alex?

Have I missed something?

/S

It's wrong the ways guys press for it. A woman should not have to give out to keep the relationship. That's shallow. Gr! See198 better make up points here. He's on the bad side. And not in a good way!
Good so far. ^.^

That story was amazing... I can't believe English is your third language and you actually write better than me. Bleh, I gotta get me a proof reader. By the way, not meaning to sound like a suck up or anything but that has to be the best lemon I've ever read. Now, if you'll excuse me I need to go and have a lie down. @_@

Oh my dear limited edition. This was absolutely beautiful. You have such a wonderful way with words, turning them this way and that to paint such lovely images. Provocative, emotional, wonderful prose that's so very poetic. TO say I loved it would be an understatement. And the ending was wonderfully revealed. It's beautiful!

No, I read this one yesterday.
But I didn't get the time to review, so don't think I'm like going "OHH, NICE ONE TO REVIEW ON."

Hah, I may be a loser, but I'm not that big of one.

Anyhoo.
I thought it was adorable. Absolutely ADORABLE. It was so fun to read and the father.
Don't even get me started with the father! I sat here and read it and was just like -jaw drop!-. Even though I sort of predicted that he was like...weird. Hah.

The way the characters interacted in the story was what gave it such a great touch. Amazing job on this story, I loved it like like like MY COMPUTER.
Giggle.

it was amazing. i thought the conclusion was very very well writen. it summed everything up but still let the reader make some exploring in what the rest of the day will hold for the two. very good piece of write!

Haha... Wow. You've captured the essence of IMs in their most basic form xD Cant wait to see what'll happen next... Oh wait--Ill just press 'next chapter'. Then add the stories to favorites... I need to stop saying what Ill do like this... meh -.-

I liked your ending. It stopped at a good spot and gave a sense of closing instead of leaving you hanging in mid air. It was a good story. Congrats.

I like how your story's developing. Your getting to know the characters and you write your detail in a flowing manner, something I fail to accomplish. I also like the realism that you've shown. I only know a few authors on fictionpress who can pull it off as well as you.

Oh yes. Of course I realise that was the end, after I submit the review...

Forgibe me?

Pleaseer?

I apoligize (sp?) (yes, the b is sposed to be there in forgive)

I'm off to hyperventilate, then die of stupidity.

Why?!

Why must you torment me so?

You're so mean.

MEANY!

If there was a way to put reviews in bold, you'd better believe this would be sir. Yeah, that's it, SIR. Even if you might be a girl. SO THERE.

Anywhoot (owl call), update soon?

Please?

Pleaser?