Ok, this is a really great haiku. I think that as a whole it says a lot, yet even each stanza says a lot so I'm going to review them seperately.

1. I love the rhythm and rhyme of it. Then it is so true of how it is to live in today's world.

2. To love and destroy. Anything we love we seem so apt to destroy.

3. Yeah, we need more time cause we don't remember how to live. Sanity is weak. People think being normal is the thing, but who are they to say what is normal or sane, perhaps they are insane.

Overall, thank you for writing this, very beautiful. Shall be copied and posted for further enjoyment...with absolute credit to you of course.

>Strength-Face Fear

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I like this poem, especially the line "To love and destroy". It's true that these two things are sometimes very close...

"To love and destroy"- I loved that line. Great job!

beautiful. i love the middle stanza & "sanity is weak". gorgeous writing.

xoxocasey

I sense a touch of confusion admist the yearning. I like that - it does kind of reminds me of how I'm currently feeling. Something in my subconscious made a tiny noise (metaphorically. ;)) when I noticed that after the first rhyming stanza, you decided to drop the rhyming pattern for the 2nd and 3rd stanzas. Maybe it would have been better if you carried on the trait or actually dropped it altogether? Personally, I never bothered to rhyme with my poems, but hey, that's just me. ;) Although, I must say I really, really do totally agree on one thing, that sanity truly is weak (when seen through my perspective). :) Keep them coming!

I love the last line "Sanity is weak" on it's own it says so much and in this poem, it paints a picture. really well done.

Beautiful and simple.

It's resonence has cut through my not entirely sober state of mind.

Happy new year by the way!

Wow. Love this

yeah haikus are 5,7,5... it was a series of them though... maybe i just miscounted i will go back and look. thanks for the review. good poem.

I loved this a lot. I feel that these haikus may have a stronger impact if you seperate the three haikus with a nice space, and in each seperate haiku, there is no gap between the lines. Anyway, I loved the last for each of those three haiku, they really closed the haikus very well with a very strong dramatic effect.

That's really cute! I like it! Good Job!~Ms. Suess

this was really good. liked it a lot.