 The Postscript 2006-01-06 . chapter 1Loved it...so rich with image. Keep writing. |
 Dale Christopher 2005-12-30 . chapter 1You're right, it is a tired subject. None the less, you made it your own and I like your words. |
 Silver Phoenix Falling 2005-12-30 . chapter 1Beautiful haiku! I love the image of snow sanctifying the world. |
 Dark Elegance10 2005-12-30 . chapter 1that is so pretty! |
 thursdays and rain 2005-12-30 . chapter 1wow. that was awesome imagery & i think i'm lovin your penname c: lol. |
 DeliriousInsanity 2005-12-30 . chapter 1Extremely beautiful. Good job. |
 maxnotevoltage 2005-12-30 . chapter 1So few words, so beautifully expressed, such awesome meaning... That last line is so amazing. Snow does seem to "sanctify the world"... Well done! -- J.max |