that's really sweet. i think every girl wants that.

Simple. Cute.

Wow, this was so sweet. I simply loved it.

Touching and sweet. Though I think if you add "that" in line 3:"A kiss to show me [that]..." it might sound a bit better. I really enjoyed this poem though, good job.

this is lovely. i really like the format, with a line for each kiss (and, of course, 16 kisses!)- nice work!