Very meaningfull. I like it.

Your poems I've read so far are fairly short but they say a lot in very few lines. Bravo.

Beautifully written.

i liek this.. very cool

Gorgeous imagery. It reminds me a bit of a series of poes by a woman named Dorianne Laux, based on Edward Hopper paintings. At least, i think it was Dorianne Laux. It might be someone entirely different.

Still, wonderful job.

-pictographic.love

oh beautiful. especially the incisors of december, which really struck me.--salemxx

i'm thinking my oleader you mean rosebay-oleander, right? well, damn, i love this poem. you did a great job with it. nice job.

Simply breathtaking... the originality of your imagery really shines. And thank you for your review!

so raw and powerful.like chopin on a rainy day.

very pretty and poetic all in a few lines lots of emotion was conveyed.

Fascinating; you paint a picture here well. The balance of your possession of him (your need or want) and his need to keep going (a poisonous plant cannot grow in the same place long.) Well done.

Juliet.

Like oleander. Just caught me, for some reason I don't know how to express.