 Hitomi328 2006-04-21 . chapter 1aww...this is truly ironic, yet very good. remembrance is just something all mortals seek, becuase immortality is not an option. memory is the only thing that's left behind...and i really like how random you made this prose, becuase memories are such. very nice!:) i especially liked "But no true simplicity exists as that in nature, where thought is obsolete and only the senses may capture its mystery." nature is wonderful and it is true that nothing better can capture but your senses. i just love everything about this. great job!:) |