|Reviews for Untitled|
| Pandakun84 12/9/06 . chapter 1
Cool! I love this! Great job!
| lostandwandering 1/6/06 . chapter 1
for reviewing my poem. your poem is to the point, but i can see the deeper meaning. keep writing.
| lordelfy 1/4/06 . chapter 1
good poem..i like this
| hey maria 12/31/05 . chapter 1
The last line is just killer..
| Herminia 12/31/05 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. I liked it.
| les petits bateaux 12/31/05 . chapter 1
Wow...I simply love this haiku. Powerful, deep and very angst-ridden. Good job.
| Faithless Juliet 12/30/05 . chapter 1
To condemn ourselves (supposedly) should bring such peace to ourselves- I think someone lied when they said self-mutilation was the new in-way-to live. I’ve known so many people who’ve fallen into this category; I’m glad that I’ve never had the stomach for self-destruction. I’m one of those people who let others destroy her rather then doing it herself- I guess underneath we’re all one or another. [Crazy thoughts! This is just what came to mind while reading this.]
| randompoetry 12/30/05 . chapter 1
Oh, ouch, the words just hurt my teeth! This was so powerful in just a few words.