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Pandakun84 12/9/06 . chapter 1Cool! I love this! Great job! |
lostandwandering 1/6/06 . chapter 1for reviewing my poem. your poem is to the point, but i can see the deeper meaning. keep writing. |
lordelfy 1/4/06 . chapter 1good poem..i like this |
hey maria 12/31/05 . chapter 1The last line is just killer.. |
Herminia 12/31/05 . chapter 1Short and sweet. I liked it. |
les petits bateaux 12/31/05 . chapter 1Wow...I simply love this haiku. Powerful, deep and very angst-ridden. Good job. |
Faithless Juliet 12/30/05 . chapter 1To condemn ourselves (supposedly) should bring such peace to ourselves- I think someone lied when they said self-mutilation was the new in-way-to live. I’ve known so many people who’ve fallen into this category; I’m glad that I’ve never had the stomach for self-destruction. I’m one of those people who let others destroy her rather then doing it herself- I guess underneath we’re all one or another. [Crazy thoughts! This is just what came to mind while reading this.] Juliet. |
randompoetry 12/30/05 . chapter 1Oh, ouch, the words just hurt my teeth! This was so powerful in just a few words. |