very good, very good. i'm guessing this is a one-shot?...

i would say more but i have to get off the computer. r.

Oh, so sad! Oh... *tear* (well not tears cause I'm at work- but I feel like crying!). Excellent story, well written...wish it had had a happier ending though- I'm big on Happy Endings... ^_^ But good job!

I really like this story. Its so sad... you made me cry.

Very, very touching... I cried.. !_!

ASHY. Why did you not tell me you were writing something else?! I am quite sad. But this is amazing! I almost cried. Quite possibly the best thing that you've written (that I've read, anyway).

SmwahCourt

Wow that was really awesome!

You updated too! Happy New Years!