Favorite part was "fender strings and kerosene". Don't know if the effect you were going for is the one I got, but I thought about destruction and stuff like that. Nice job.

Wow, interesting ending and last two lines. Evokes the feeling of searching, searching, and perhaps finding.

"I’ll be just fine, Pretending I’m not"

I love that.

I really love this one. Brilliant as always.

ANNA

Wow, this was good, I really like the line "fender strings and kerosene."

'fender strings and kerosene' that was wonderful. it reminded me of a song i once heard by the used.

i'll be just fine, pretending i'm not.. i'm far from lonely & it's all that i've got.. laladida.. i The Used too & i adore this poem c:

WOW, great description in this poem with really powerfull words, fantastic.