|Reviews for on the shelf|
| Tikklz 1/11/06 . chapter 1
Favorite part was "fender strings and kerosene". Don't know if the effect you were going for is the one I got, but I thought about destruction and stuff like that. Nice job.
| Moondog Dozier 1/8/06 . chapter 1
Wow, interesting ending and last two lines. Evokes the feeling of searching, searching, and perhaps finding.
| RedHairedWriter 1/2/06 . chapter 1
"I’ll be just fine, Pretending I’m not"
I love that.
| Anna178 1/1/06 . chapter 1
I really love this one. Brilliant as always.
| randompoetry 1/1/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this was good, I really like the line "fender strings and kerosene."
| a lonely september 12/31/05 . chapter 1
'fender strings and kerosene' that was wonderful. it reminded me of a song i once heard by the used.
| thursdays and rain 12/31/05 . chapter 1
i'll be just fine, pretending i'm not.. i'm far from lonely & it's all that i've got.. laladida.. i The Used too & i adore this poem c:
| sixPAC 12/31/05 . chapter 1
WOW, great description in this poem with really powerfull words, fantastic.