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Reviews For: Not A Monster

dana-maru1 2006-02-06 ch 1,	abuseGreat story, very different to what I usually come across. Hope you write more on this :)
billyez26 2006-01-08 ch 1,	abuseHeh, heh, now this is something ain't it? I turned the tables on your own writing it seems like. A totally irredemable werewolf who enjoys killing folks? That's one of the first I can remember being in your stories. Enough messing around though. I really did like it. Although, I have to agree that Susan was a tad dumb, but that's what love does to you if you let it anyway. It's kind or refreshing to read a story that basically tells about the folly's of trusting love ("Love obscures all") instead of the love conquers all cliche. The beginning kind of reminded me of one of my stories actually.
Glass-rose15 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abusewah, I didn't see that coming. And usally I'm good at seeing what will happen. But good show for you for making the him evil. It's about time some one twisted things around with the whole werewolves are nice and fluffy stuff. And the way you wrote it some part of me wants to hate him, yet I bring my self to say it. Great job. Although it dose add some human likeness in it seeing as Kyle didn't kill Susan. But I really look forward to reading about Kyle. Things will probably get interseting.
Drizit 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abuseWoah. A bad assed werewolf. That's a first... I mean, your werewolves are always lovey dovey! What happened to them? What happened to the cute and cuddly werewolves with big sad eyes the size of the moon? laughs in any case, yeah it would have been interesting to have more character details but this in itself is just fine man. Great job!
Lady of Fire and Ice 2005-12-31 ch 1,	abuseIt had all the elements a story needed in very few words. It takes skill to do that. You didn't need the cuss words though. They weren't neccesary.
Autumnymph 2005-12-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseuh oh sad... Now that's quite new. And I'm actually not mad at how the story ends. You've always written about how a werewolf and a human are so in love with each other blahblahblah, that when it turns out to be this way, it's actually quite interesting. I really don't know what I should feel for the girl. Sympathize her, or just say, "How pathetic." Both?
dust2dust 2005-12-31 ch 1,	abusehaha wow that ending was messed up... I didn't predict that, though. I like the twist of it. And you write very well.
Abby Lou 2005-12-31 ch 1,	abuseI think this has a lot of possibility. I like the way the ending surprises you. I think you could draw it out even more, so that when it comes, it really comes out of left field.

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