i can't believe myself. D: i read this like 2 weeks ago, and i still haven't reviewed it! ><

so, here you go. :]

i like the poem. i love the metaphors you used. and i like how it shows a lot of imagery. i actually saw a dancer in my mind when i was reading it today!

nicely done! were a few coma errors, and pause errors, but other than that. . . .reminds of life. especially the last line "dance with two ends". it definitely reminds me of lfe ^^

goodwriting!

-Rachel.

Hm...I like it... It's kinda creepy and reminds me of an almost demonic night time ceremony or sacrafice, but i think it represents something else too...can't say what though.