very cute story loved it. watch some typos but those are easy fixes (one was in the epilouge when she was talking about when she first said i love you to rowan) keep writing your very good. I loved the imagery you gave and i could really feel Dest's emotions.

That was truly amazing!

nice story.

aw this was cute... she was a bit slow in realising who he was though lol but oh well great story
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BEST STORY EVA!

IM HOOKED ON!

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha.
I actually counted the words.
Will, 1, you, 2, go, 3, out, 4, with, 5, me, 6,?

A great ending to an great story. Ever think about making this into a movie?

Another great chapter. Just some small stuff to fix: take out the "has" in the sentence: "“Mr. Randolph has is that possible?” Brian asked looking around." Also take out out the "s" in this sentence: "Rowan is sure that this will be a great experience for everyone involves and says that his band will end the talent show with a song or two of theirs while the judges are deciding who will win!” Mr. Randolph said jumping up and down in excitement." and change it to a "d". Besides those two there was one moe, but i can't find it. Anyways, keep up the great work

Another great chapter. Keep up the good work; i can actually picture this making it as a movie, don't know how much cash it will bring in, but just need to fix this other part: Not sure why "what I" this is in here of the sentence: "I knew my parents had questions about how I knew the boy and what I why did he seem like we were in a relationship, but surprisingly they never asked." But maybe you can take it out.

One of the best stories that i've read ever. Great scenery. Just need to fix this little part: take out the extra "the words" in this sentence: "I closed my eyes and then heard the words the words ‘Happy New Year’ shouted out on the screen."

Great story. I liked it.

Oh Lady Writer. *bows prostrate* I'm not sure if over tiredness contributed to it but: what an awsome story. Oh I love it. Oh, my catnip, it's so delicious. Yummy. -Love, hope, dreams, future, peace, equality, home, :all for the heart.-

*huggles*

Wow...10 chapters. That's short for you.

I'm so glad you're back! You're one of my favorite authors on fictionpress.

Hey! Congrats on finishing! There were some spelling mistakes, but I think most people got the point :D You keep writing, i'll keep reading! [and reviewing ;)] Till then,

-The Masked Marauder