I know what you mean...You have this wonderful idea for a poem, but it sounded better in your head than it did on paper. Even after you had trouble, I think it turned out great!

I loved this one too. The last line gave an amazing image.

nice haiku. make more!

-sticks out tongue- bleh. solemnity is about writer's block & that about sums it up. thanks 4 another loverly review c:

bella bella! beautiful.

First of all I want to tell u this: uhdoon bameelsoorog balgun byulun duh beechna... that was my putting ur message in korean in english phonetics (thats all i know how to do in korean, except for writing names)...About your poem, the last line's image about smiling in tears is very effective, and it does creative that sense of bittersweet hope. Kepp up the good work!

it was interesting, the last line. it was poignant and hopeful. keep on writing!