"You’re hiding your faith within you face" it should be your face right? anyway..i like the way you portray it...i like some lines..though at this time i'm not inclined to figure what it means. haha..i'm lazy.

"life sweeps by like the sound of death"

very true. very good poem. I like this. "too deep to say it dosn't seep in the truest way" good job. keep writing! -love ya

I remember that feeling. I like it it's good. Great job.

I've felt the same way before. This was very well written, short but has a great meaning. Good work, keep it up.