interesting. "assembly-line produce- anything resembling the profound."i love that line. i love the format. shall keep a lookout for more of your poems.

I apologize for this duely late review. (That's it... I'm putting you in my review alert). Never is it considered boring or dull, when I read your well-crafted poetry. I truly enjoyed the format you used with this piece. Your avant garde, perhaps? - ADD-san

Hi tree!! Interesting way to start the year (and the first thing I read ^^). I like it. Very different from what I normally read.

This is really good.

"-no one else could tell me otherwise."LOVE.

"Anything seemingly mundane - has no depth."

Simply beautiful. I love the verse form, too. Very...edgy.

- E.D.

Happy New Year!I know it is for me, the Tree has updated; my appetite is sated.

i love the verse style. ^^ new format. always the same delivery. ^^ happy new year! and thank you for the delightful read.

kakyou