See I DO like this. Your frustration comes out but without a childish rant. I like the breaking up of the words, it slows it down a bit and makes you think. Well done its hard to get anger across without getting too het up in the poem. Fab !!

loved it, the broken format an the haunting voice just beautiful. the whole thing is just so beautiful. love it. love it.

~* noelle

wow i love the second stanza. good poem. bad way to end '05 i can see if you wrote this from experience, though. anyway, once again--love the second stanza. keep writing!

A very good poem. You portray the emotion of anger very acuretly. You can actually feel the anger of it, I love it. I have to agree, don't be so ** yourself. ;)~Megs

the world h a s gone down for the first line i think.you've got your emotions across nicely, don't be so ** yourself.

Wow... I can feel anger through there.

Now this is one of the greatest poets I know! You put the emotion in me... great one Rei!