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| An-Author-At-Heart 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseNice, the form of writing is pretty good, I like it. The poem in general was pretty good too |
| button-nose 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseIt interests me this new way of writing you have experimented with... Its almost as if the words in bold mean more to you and you are tryin to stress them to the reader... I was a little saddened by this piece. I have often found it hard also when someone you love, suddenly has more time for someone else. Its a gut renching feeling...i loved it!! Button nose x x |