Seems like this could develop into something okay. Took you two chapters to get past the basic premise, but that is okay. In that the characters might develop all right. I don't understand though why mangas have to make all the pretty people evil and sadistic. Her fellow school classmate was not a good person you presumed in the last chapter, and I bet if she gets back and has any of this leak out the main Hirotomi Yuki is going to be all haughty like her school princess previously was. I can just sense that a tiny bit. I wonder why I am reviewing?

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hahahahaha funny concept.

LOL!

I love this chapter!

Nice.

Blast that freaking granny.

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Lol!

I like Shinji too!

I really like the comedy in this story.

I really love this.

Gotta read the next chapter!

LOL

This is really funny!

This is funny lol!

Please update soon!

*laughs*

This is cool.

I'm lovin it.

If you had ample time, please check out my other stuff and kindly leave a review. Thanks a lot.

Yay! So good again! I'll make sure to read you further chapters!

Cute little sister. She seems a little air headed, but I laughed like crap like I read about the bit where she decleared her love for Renji the kitchen boy. That kid should be lucky he has such a cute girlfriend. Yet, Miyumi doesn't seem so air headed at times, especially the part where she talked about their mother. It made me sympathise with their mother as well. As far as I'm concerned, her husband (Miyumi's dad) is a idoit. Yuki was rather stilted in this chapter. She didn't seem to be as sacastic as usual. Is it a new side of Yuki?

This chapter was good and neatly paragraphed. You really cleaned up the page, and it's not riddled with much grammatical mistakes unlike the early chapters. Your writing is improving.

Keep it up and update soon!

Nanao

PS. I've completed the drawing of Jinto and sent it to your email. Do tell me your comments!

That..was short. Vety short. But interesting. But no Souichiro cameos! Why? I need my Sou-chan!

Ookay... I just made an account to flame an 'author' here. I would not call her an author because she PLAGIARISED A STORY. SHE COPIED IT WORD FOR WORD and passed it on for herself. THAT is NOT cool. I would have private messaged you and leave a comment on your forum but this is a new account and I can't do any of that for three days so here I am as a review to get to you.

'lightofhope18' is a plagiariser and I want to make it clear. SHE COPIED the story from someone on fanfiction. Word for word and SLIGHTLY changed the names around. Sakura, Toya... no wonder people thougt it was like fanfiction because she COPIED the story from BlueSnowDrop. You can go on her account on fanfiction and you can CLEARLY see that a pathetic person like 'lightofhope18' copied it. light of hope... light of bullshit. I know the REAL author is very angry that someone STOLE her story and I am pissed as well. Cause plagiarism is BULLSHIT.

You wrote on your forum:

'Okay, I for one, am a big fan of this story. It's just so awesome! Does anyone else here like it?'

Seriously... the plagiariser is pathetic.

I love this story-I reckon that Raikoh dude is the one she met when she ran away. Anyways more! _