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| soojinyeh 2007-09-12 ch 1,  | abusehahahahaha funny concept. |
| megan 2007-06-21 ch 13, anon. | abuseyou need to update more often! *throws desk* update or DIE!! |
| megan 2007-06-05 ch 13, anon. | abuseok, i advise that if you keep your responses to your reviews small or out of the story page, you will find that your chapters aren't that long. then if you will keep the dictionary to only the words that were said in the chapter, and then only if they're new, you wont have to keep repeating them. as of now, i get what -san and -Chan mean and can even use them in sentence form. now lets see some love action here! and why do they blusha ll the time? its coming so that yuki blushes whenever shes aroound them and vice-versa. oh, i must say from reading one of your a/n's that a:you must really love your brother to reccommend his stories on your site b:you must have two computers or c:you all update at different times. wow. this turned out to be lengthy review. oh and its late! no wonder i'm grumpy! :P sorry if i sounded mean, which i think i did... whoops... |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-03 ch 11, | abuseLOL! I love this chapter! |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-02 ch 6, | abuseNice. Blast that freaking granny. >_ |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-02 ch 5, | abuseLol! I like Shinji too! |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-02 ch 4, | abuseI really like the comedy in this story. I really love this. Gotta read the next chapter! |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-02 ch 3, | abuseLOL This is really funny! |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-02 ch 2, | abuseThis is funny lol! Please update soon! *laughs* |
| CrystallineEyes 2007-06-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is cool. I'm lovin it. If you had ample time, please check out my other stuff and kindly leave a review. Thanks a lot. ^^ |
| Kiari Sage 2007-03-24 ch 1, | abuseYay! So good again! I'll make sure to read you further chapters! |
| Nanao Nagase 2006-12-28 ch 10, | abuseCute little sister. She seems a little air headed, but I laughed like crap like I read about the bit where she decleared her love for Renji the kitchen boy. That kid should be lucky he has such a cute girlfriend. Yet, Miyumi doesn't seem so air headed at times, especially the part where she talked about their mother. It made me sympathise with their mother as well. As far as I'm concerned, her husband (Miyumi's dad) is a idoit. Yuki was rather stilted in this chapter. She didn't seem to be as sacastic as usual. Is it a new side of Yuki? This chapter was good and neatly paragraphed. You really cleaned up the page, and it's not riddled with much grammatical mistakes unlike the early chapters. Your writing is improving. Keep it up and update soon! Nanao PS. I've completed the drawing of Jinto and sent it to your email. Do tell me your comments! |
| Shizuka no Namida 2006-12-10 ch 10, | abuseThat..was short. Vety short. But interesting. But no Souichiro cameos! Why? I need my Sou-chan! |
| Acaylee 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abuseOokay... I just made an account to flame an 'author' here. I would not call her an author because she PLAGIARISED A STORY. SHE COPIED IT WORD FOR WORD and passed it on for herself. THAT is NOT cool. I would have private messaged you and leave a comment on your forum but this is a new account and I can't do any of that for three days so here I am as a review to get to you. 'lightofhope18' is a plagiariser and I want to make it clear. SHE COPIED the story from someone on fanfiction. Word for word and SLIGHTLY changed the names around. Sakura, Toya... no wonder people thougt it was like fanfiction because she COPIED the story from BlueSnowDrop. You can go on her account on fanfiction and you can CLEARLY see that a pathetic person like 'lightofhope18' copied it. light of hope... light of **. I know the REAL author is very angry that someone STOLE her story and I am ** as well. Cause plagiarism is **. You wrote on your forum: 'Okay, I for one, am a big fan of this story. It's just so awesome! Does anyone else here like it?' Seriously... the plagiariser is pathetic. |
| Akuma Musouka 2006-11-26 ch 9, | abuseI love this story-I reckon that Raikoh dude is the one she met when she ran away. Anyways more! ^_^ |