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| Cheny 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the emotion of the poem, the only criticism i would make is to say that you should engage the reader feel the same way |
| Jodie Sinclair 2006-01-01 ch 1,  | abusegreat job love it to death!so much emotion |
| button-nose 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI found this very sweet, if a little sad perhaps. I got the impression of a fantastic bond shared between two people. I love the way you have put that across and with so much emotion...i hope things work out for you both...in wahtever way that may be...great job Button Nose x x |