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| The Mumbling Sage 2007-06-05 ch 1,  | abuse'Fools and their unfounded noodles!' Ah, culinary superiority at its best. I think I laughed out loud. And you don't have to be Asian to enjoy that steaming white-ish delicacy... Uncle Ben's rice bowls are awesome. I had one once and have never forgotten it. :p M |
| Taylary Daisuke 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abuse^_^ ...lol I don't know if it was supposed to be serious or funny but I found myself laughing throughout every verse. A little on the creepy side if you think of what might have drove you into writting this but I think that's what makes it the even more entretaining to read. Good work. I want to read Starlight Legacies now but the chapters are way too long for me to read now. So later when I have the time, I'll read it. |
| The Smoke 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is pretty funny, and also very well written- I really enjoyed it. Well done. |
| Poetchic 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseOh rice where have you been all my life? Thou art lovely ( in more ways than just taste) in a steaming bowl filled with chicken. I shall embrace your tastyness forevever, oh my sweet rice. Loved the poem espically the line " a conqueroer that rivals Genghis Khan" keep writing... poetchic |
| Sharpes 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI like the last bit of the poem. Had a nice touch there. Oh and I love rice. :) |