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| d666lisa 2007-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseBRILLIANT :-D |
| Callisto Jean 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseThis story was written a long time ago...but do you mind telling me who Robert was? His job and the policeman? I have a feeling he set her up with the theif and stuff? Please tell me! |
| Kimberli Kitten 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseWow. I've never read a one-shot like that before. It had so many things going on, it was like telling a whole story. Pretty cool. |
| Pinkamoo 2007-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI love your story! Its cute, funny and quirky! Good job!! |
| luv me like no other 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is adorable. I loved it! |
| rocky19 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abusethis would have been a good stry to keep writing |
| Chocolate Herrings 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseSo adorable... I just want to know more though! Good old rubber ducky... |
| emerald 2006-06-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeh, that was awesome- cute. Love it a lot...ah, fate was good for her in the end. |
| April 2006-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey!! Rubber ducky your the one!! I LOVED Bert and Ernie! (or however you spell it) Man is it just me or does this girl 'Lex' have some issues! There having dinner together though -- that's sweet! VERY, VERY, GOOD!! See you on the Curbside (near the buses) sometime soon!Hugs and Love!! --April-- |
| Smiles and Regrets 2006-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHey, I thought it was pretty good. I only had two things that bothered me in the least about the story. The first was that the rubber duck was in the title but didn't play much of a part in the story. The second was the fact that in the second paragraph, second sentence you changed the p.o.v. It reads: I had been out all day looking for gifts that could possibly please a set of quadruplets, all of which were girls and seventeen years old. HER nieces all had different personalities. Other than that i thought it was rather cute. Good job,Lauren |
| chthonical 2006-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI love your one-shots :D While I was reading this story, I had this absurd idea that he had paid the thief to make off with her purse, but that's ridiculous and I'm neurotic and paranoid. ...Oh, right. Review. Well, you already know it's extremely well-written and that you need to write more. *uses Jedi mind tricks* You will write more. Write more. Wo, I need sugar. ~Mikki |
| OhDarling 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Good title and summary, too, they're always hard for me to do. Nice detail and subtly letting us know the narrator (before she pours her heart out to the stranger)... |
| invisible.writer 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseVery cute and heart-warming. I was in need of a good read like this one. Thanks for that.My only complaint - though not really a complaint - would be that the rubber duck had only a little to do with the story, and even then I didn't find that it really related to anything in the story in particular except for home. Perhaps if it held a bigger space, a more permanent explanation? Not sure if I make sense, but thanks for the read all the same. |
| deathbyeuphoria 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseOne word: kut3. Yeah, I liked it & I'm horrid with reviews so this shall have to suffice, yeah? W00t-w00t. Keep writing, bizznotch. |