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| Brooke Davis 2006-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseOoh...cool story. I like it. Thanks for R&Ring my story. |
| Lady of Fire and Ice 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseAre you going to write more? You write this all very eloquently, but in the first chapter you say, "But they're stupid." It seems to interrupt the flow of eloquence. By the way, nice name. |