Loved it!

That was Great. it was a wonderful read who cares if it makes sense!

i tried to read it at normal pace, but it just confused me. haha:)) so i took your advice and read it faster. and i enjoyed it a lot. i'm still laughing, see. hahaha:)) thanks for your review, by the way:)

Hahaha that took me a few reads to get it... made me laugh though! I love the perfect syllables, how it all fits together... It totally sounds like something Dr. Seuss would have dreamed up in his free time!
~Daughter of Music

Very Dr. Seuss-ish. I like.

Very cute little nonsensical poem. When you try to think about it you get nothing but images out of Alice in Wonderland...lol. Very nice. The last line doesn't quite rhyme, but I've pulled that trick many a time so I can't really talk. Anyway, awesome job. I'll have to check out more of your work. ~Krys

lol tongue twister xtreme! XD

Absolutely Delightfull :D

This is cool!it's funny and it makes absoloutely no sense! It rocks!

@_@... what just happened?

Lmao nonsense poem but hilarious. ^_^

It is a nonsense poem, but it's a really cute one, and you work the sound of it excellently. I like the rhymes and alliterations and whatnot. Quite cute! =)

awthis is so cute! i love it. it sounds like doctor suess. i think the last line should ryme (however you spell it) with "would meet" and i think the last line needs to leave your readers really confused so they have something to think about. i love it. keep up the good work.