Reviews for Philosophical Grafitti

hey maria
2006-01-01
ch 1,

abuseThe last two lines made me shiver. E.

elegiac lies
2006-01-01
ch 1,

abusethe title/line "philosophical graffiti" really caught my attention. i got such a powerful image from it! also i loved the way you have used form, and the way that "and the world snaps back into place" is on the left. cute!!i liked the ending too: "his hopes may shatter but i blame vodka/for all my mistakes" if i had any criticism, it would be that the first two lines seemed to be a bit disengaged when i first looked at them.but i loved it.

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