Stellar (pun intended, and forgive me for it)! The emphasis on color is great--characterization without having to actually describe the girl in question. And thank you for the review!

HG

beautiful. i have a crazy beat of a song in my head.

very nice. vivid. i liked the fact shes wearing yellow, its an unusual choice. it reminds me off something i did called 'ankti' (in my 'of technicolor people' if you want to see). it seems we had some similar ideas when it comes to dancing. or at least i thought so. nice job-the Lady Elaine