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| Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis... 2008-03-17 ch 1,  | abusereally cute~ |
| j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseYeah, you did succeed. Great job! Like it, too. |
| nonaccount 2007-09-05 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if you're still active on this site, but I found this story today and can't resist letting you know how much I enjoyed it. It was pretty easy to follow, I only got lost once or twice, but that's probably just me, your clues helped fill in the blanks. Really adorable oneshot. |
| pneumothorax 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseInteresting without description - it works! Cute :) |
| Ms. AndraCarpenter 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was one of the best dialogue pieces I've ever read! Good job. |
| EraseTheMemories 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuselmao. sweet. cute. perfection. |
| Joanne 2006-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL! cute, hilarious, and droolable XD |
| princess max 2006-01-09 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. I could tell exactly who was who, probably because of Noah's stand-out personality:) Gotta love Noah, bad humour and all, and I've gotta love Jesse for his cute sensibilities! |
| Dr. Pepper 14 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis made me laugh so many times in so many random ways... And I really could tell who was speaking when. You did a really good job of that. And the anticlamatic end only makes the story that much cuter. (I didn’t know about you and then the whole sexual identity thing and small towns and gay movies and well, you see what I’m saying.) I love boys who ramble! Sequel? I think that's a marvelous idea. |
| Silver Rain Fell 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseLOL. Very good. Liked the whole pudding thing. Also very sweet :D Keep it up! |
| Ayakaishi Fei 2006-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nicely done. First slash story I came across too, and v. enjoyable. You got the actions across so well. I like your style :) |
| Awekid 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abusehehehe, FINALLY! A ** story with HOMOS |
| xanthofile 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuse“You know, I hate it when people say that. We’re not on Law and Order, I’m not a hostile witness.” “You are as of now. Answer me, tell me that you don’t like anyone that way and I’ll drop it.” oh god, i love those lines!! and this! so much better than either of mine. *sighs* this really rocks the casbah and back. way to go! can you come up with another?? *puppy eyed* or not, you can do either or. but i'd like another one. |