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| Riding The Lightning 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseI like how you wrote about what an experience having pink hair is/was. Now I don't have to try it myself. My favorite line was the "My hair is filled with it, practically dripping with it." That's some good use of imagery. |
| mack 2006-02-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting... i've never dyed my hair so I wouldn't know... it's short but very descriptive. |
| Strawberrybaby-33 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! I love this! I know exactly what it feels like, although, I had blue hair. Heh, I know you want concrit, but I am sorry to say that you will just have to be content with 'It is so good!' ^_^ Great job. |
| scriblets1an2 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI like how you wrote about yourself! It was well written |
| D L Dzioba 2006-01-14 ch 1, | abuseYes it was pointless. But It WAS a well written character study. ~D |
| Fool of Amaranthine 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseHeh, that pretty much sums it up! Not that many people look at your hair as often as they used too, though. Maybe they are so used to our little group's weirdness that they don't care if one of its members has pink hair? Who knows. Anyway, I was thinking; should I dye my hair orange or bleach it white? eh? But my mom will probably say that young women shouldn't have hair the color of tangerines, or the color of snow. I think it would be fun! But if she has something against those two colors, maybe my hair can be dyed pink like yours? oh well. I will probably just wait until I move out (whenever that is) so I can dye my hair ^_^ ah, I guess that the point of this review was just to burn off some hyperness!You interesting, mentally challenged friend,E (or E-lizard, or squee [as Casey calls me], or ee-mi-nee-mi-nee...yea, you get the point) |
| Naga-chan-in-wonderland 2006-01-04 ch 1, | abuseHa. I liked this. I've had all different sorts of colors in my hair, so I can relate. Good work. |
| Tikvah Ariel 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseLast line is weak, but I like the little girl reference and the overall tone of the peice. It has a nice moral of defying stereotypes |