I really wish that were me. lol. the last line was particularly beautiful. Awesome.

Aww...

I read this aloud and thought that it had a lyrical quality to it. Beautiful in concept and language.

"...and I don't want to do anything else either" seemed kind of awkward because it breaks the flow of the parallelism.

"How you're moving when the rest of the world is frozen stiff is beyond me, but then you've always been magic." ! I really liked that.

"...so it's a good thing that I don't want to." and "...that I hope you know..." both seem kind of awkward as well because the narrator is describing the other person's actions and then suddenly describing his/her own reaction.

"Your only [movement] is to walk..."?

Very nice.

Interesting, mysterious in a way. Sounds like a fantasy lol.

beautiful.