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| alice 2007-08-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseplayful chapter! me like! |
| alice 2007-08-19 ch 4, anon. | abusethis story has been enjoyable to read! update soon, okay? |
| EJ.Wells. 2007-08-04 ch 5,  | abuselove this chapter! definitely want to see more interaction between eddie/char. can't get enough of them! the brother navid is so adorable! what kind of name is navid? not a name you hear often... |
| EJ.Wells. 2007-08-01 ch 4, | abusei read your author's note and i'm glad to hear that you're having a good time writing this story! not rushing you or anything, the process is entirely up to the author and i'm aware. take care! =) |
| EJ.Wells. 2007-08-01 ch 3, | abuseaw the family moment in the end was funny! |
| EJ.Wells. 2007-08-01 ch 2, | abuseeddie seems charming for what he is and definitely overconfident! hehehehe i like this story so far! |
| EJ.Wells. 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abusethis chapter introduces its characters nicely. =) |
| lilacks_7_purples 2007-08-01 ch 5, anon. | abusevery nice chapter! there's chemistry brewing! can't wait until you update, but in the meantime- more navid! this brother looks like he's interesting to get to know =] oh! are we ever going to meet the parents? they're always at work! |
| ihrtbks 2007-07-31 ch 5, | abuseAw! The cheesecake thing was so sweet! One question, if her cell phone says 7.56 how can she be late later at 7.10? Eddie's so SWEET! Suggestions...maybe do a Eddie POV interlude, but definitely put in the siblings more, exactly like the scene with Navid! UPDATE SOON! |
| coralize 2007-07-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseo! i liked this chapter very much! eddie is by far my favorite character and the scene at starbucks played out very nicely! lol update soon! |
| FamousOneLiners 2007-07-29 ch 5, anon. | abusesupercute! |
| I.L.P.C. 2007-07-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseah ha! things are starting to get even more interesting... Update sooN! |
| I.L.P.C. 2007-07-24 ch 3, anon. | abusehahaha the family moment at the end was so cute! navid seems like a lovable character! you should mention him more in your story! belle's okay, and jude's his own person which makes him unique in his own way. |
| I.L.P.C. 2007-07-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseaw, i love the brother navid! |
| I.L.P.C. 2007-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat opening chapter! Already loving this Eddie! |