oh! what a nice ending!
it was awsome

:D YAY i loved this story ;3

Love this story to bits!
Keep on the great work!

lol love it!

xx

good good good! I sat down with a bag full of jelly beans and read this all in one sitting. I really dont know what else to say, but I really liked it.
~Nadaa
P.S.
There are no more jelly beans.

Not bad, not bad at all :) I really enjoyed the plot but I think your writing could use a bit more depth. There isn't that much imagery or description used. I It was a good read though! Nice work

I really liked your story. I really liked all the characters.

Okay, I read this all in one sitting. The earlier chapters weren't as good (sorry I'm being so harsh!) but this last chapter - the ending - realy redeems everything. :D I was like, OH SO CLICHE, but then I was like AW. REDEEMED. And so yeah, here I am trying to make you forgive me for not reviewing the past 17 chapters. AH! I'm sorry!

But, really, this ENDING was just perfect - so detailed, so redeemable. I can clearly see the improvement between writing and the characterization of Hails. :)

-toffeecakesxox.

love it

loved it!

I liked the plot but the story moved really quickly and the characters didn't seem to have any connections. They were there but I couldn't really feel their presence. Nice job, it was still a cute story :)

Aw, Lee seems so cute. Haha, I like how you started it off, it's really realistic and easy to read :)

OMG im sorry but i would KICK HIS ARSE! If any guy thought he could cheet on me and then say 'woopsies, sorry, guess i'll brake up with her now', id absolutely go ballistic.

Loved the Story!
-W.R.

well i love this story even though you wrote it over a year..its soo cliche' but that's what i love about it =]

lol conrad's an idiot and poor peter =/ and yay they made up! lol =]