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| Boardriders 2006-06-03 ch 2, | abusehey! this is actually a pretty good story and why haven't you updated for so long? please don't tell me you're gonna abandon this story, I really like it. |
| Cool-Ruzz 2006-01-30 ch 2, | abuseOh wow, she is such a dramatic brat but I love her nevertheless. Seriously, she is so bitchy but fun at the same time that its so hard not to be friends with her. If I was in the same school with her, no doubt I'll be trying really hard to be her friend. Its not to be more popular or anything, it just seems like being with her, you'll always have a great time. Am I right? In other words, everyone goes through break ups. But I guess Marissa is so perfect that she never had to go through a bad time in her otherwise perfect life. I love the way you write. You seem so intelligent and all that I envy you so much. Keep up the good work girlfriend! Love, love, Ruzz |
| springish 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseHeehee, very interesting. It's not often that you get the point of view of the cheerleader. Usually, they're just painted as these total meanies, but it's nice to get a refreshing perspective. Hehe, liked this line: …I blanked and looked at his slight smile. “…You want to read Cosmo with me?” *thumbs up* |
| manda 2006-01-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseLOSER! luv this more than ur other 1 :p update update update!! But make sure u still hav tym 4 mee :D btw marissa sounds almost wayy 2 familiar..*ahem* sophie b anyone? ahha! kisses mandii |
| a moo 2006-01-11 ch 2, | abusefun fun fun.. love Riss, really good character.. i always find writing self obsessed characters easier and more fun.. |
| lucy 2006-01-11 ch 2, anon. | abuseaww i feel sorry for marissa :( lol she's so overdramatic tho. I liked this chapter a lot more since it was way more interesting! Update soon! |
| KaiaLeigh 2006-01-10 ch 2, | abuseI like your story so far. I hope things get better for Riss soon. The only spelling/grammer type thing I noticed is that you're spelling realize wrong. |
| KaiaLeigh 2006-01-10 ch 1, | abuseWhat a depressing beginning, aww. |
| Nyte Shade 2006-01-10 ch 2, | abuseAww...poor Riss. I feel so sorry for her. She seems so pityful. But this was written so good. Drew seems so mean but its understandable. Keep up the good work |
| lilith's heir 2006-01-10 ch 2, anon. | abusehaha i see. anger management. i really liked your new chapter, very funny. riss is just... epic. i don't know if it is because i sometimes behave like a drama queen, but i'm siding with her in this lol. |
| Ms.Romantic 2006-01-10 ch 2, | abusethankyou and LOVE IT |
| Meg 2006-01-10 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is really funny! It's really cool that you decided to do the 'other' side to the story of jock meets nerd and they fall in love and he dumps his cheerleader gf. it's looking at those stories from a completely ignored angle! :D hope to see more of it soon |
| Agent Raindrop 2006-01-10 ch 2, | abusehehe. Great story, I love how Riss is so dramatic. I love the story so far and can't wait to meet the brother, I love the way this is written because yeah, its Riss and she's a cheerleader and I love the way she thinks! hehe. Update soon! |
| butterfly-touch 2006-01-10 ch 2, | abusehey. I love your story so far. I think Marissa is awesome and that Drew is a total prude. I can't wait till his brother comes in. Update soon! |
| dorydafish 2006-01-10 ch 2, anon. | abusehehehe so funny - im in fits of laughter aw u nearly told me his name?? can't wait to find out wat hes like. Yeh i totally no wat u mean about too many of those stories going around. but u jus gotta love the fluffiness of it. LOL!! U a cheerleader or do u just think that cheerleaders are not all bad. We dont really have cheerleaders in england so i dont really no ay to judge. but in most stories they are always evil. Im assuming thats jus stereotyping. LOL!! neway another great chapter. DDF X |