wow...I'm speechless, This was beautifully written. May I add gothic and violent. I love this, Keep up the good work!

-ravishingdarkness01

i love a good bloody piece of work and this is it. right on! good work!

I love this. Beautiful and deep. Wonderfully written. Nearly on the same level as Saul Williams, even.

With all due respect,

Faerie Energy

Haunting, cold, and satisfying.

a beautiful, almost desperate piece but with an element of pride? It has an otherworldly or ancient feel to it, but seems almost timeless. I like the beautiful yet powerful imagery.

it's chilling, ethereal. haunting in a way that has you seeing lank hair, dangerous eyes, and bright cheeks, the beauty of love and madness. I love this.

This was beautifully written. You created the atmosphere perfectly. Keep writing.

oh wow... this was so beautifully & darkly written, i just love it. wonderful job.

Holy shit. I loved this! You expressed such passion, lust, and devotion in it that I was overwhelmed with emotion. I think I remember reading some of your works back on my BeyondTheHourglass name. Not sure, though. But the name Faithless Juliet sounds familiar.

wow, truly amazing.

I love this. Even your fiction is incredibly artsy and poetic.

Great job.

this was amazingly written. your ability to provoke emotion and describe scenes and feelings is beautiful. your imagery left me stunned for a moment. you awesomeness.

Definitely something interesting for the new year - keep writing like this; it's amazing!

I love the gothic grimness of this, it's cold on the surface but so deep. I can't describe how I perceived it, the word is taunting..tantris. First of yours I've read in '06, keep up the great work! Shalom.