I did more than skimming, but I think I missed a few parts. But I'll read it all soon-- bedtime now. D:

It was good. I think you really are beginning to bring "a new light" to the old plot line. :3 It's nice, and I want more.

Great beginning! The plot obviously isn't underway yet, but the story shows a lot of promise. One spelling error I noticed: In the chapter title, it's 'Assassin', not 'Assasin'.

okay so what i read so far is really good. i'll read more later and i hope you update soon it's really interesting. never stop writing!

I'm really enjoying your story so far! You've put a new spin on the whole "arranged marriage" idea. I especially like your characters; they're both realistic and intriguing. And I like the names you've chosen, as well. I'm looking forward to where you go with this idea. Update soon!

An excellently written first chapter, I hope you'll update with more!

You've developed Lynette's character rather well, and adding in the forlaetan made a very interesting turn of events from the usual 'meet prince, fall in love' story.

this is great, i really want to see more chapters. gee, lynette sounds like a cow, huh? but i'm really enjoying this, so well done :)

This first bit shows promise, but I would love to learn more with the next chapter.

I like this story. It's started out a bit predictable, a princess must marry a chosen husband, etc. But the ending, where she sees the boy, is a subtle but nice twist.

Although, I did notice that you use "…" and then add an other period or so. I didn't see anything else, really, that was all.