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| Ruby Mae 2006-04-11 ch 1,  | abusePainful childhoods leave painful memories. Luckily we were so innocent back then, we chose to have our good memories over ride them. I liked it. |
| Shanima 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI AM slightly confused but I like it aall the same. And I kind of understand what you mean. I don't understand many complicated poems but this is good. |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseNot confused, just wanting a bigger picture of the world. It’s like reading a poem through a keyhole, the outside edges blur. But you use looking through fences as part of the description within so maybe that was the desired effect. I like it. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet. |