It reads like song, to me anyway. When I read it, it went along with music in my head better than most poems I read do. Ever thought about making it a song?

In a word: Heartbreaking. Absolutely heartbreaking. Also well written. I love your word choice.

Really like it, seems really honest. Keep it up :)

I like the lines, "You carried me/So you could drop me." That's sharp, accusing, bitter.

beautifully written!

Deep and well-detailed; well done. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.