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Nestegg 2006-04-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseNow this one reminds me of my best friend in high school. We hooked up again a couple years ago and it is almost as if we were never apart.
bright horizon splash 2006-03-19 ch 1,	abusewonderful job, i love the time lapses. and the swing at then end is such a beautiful finish. bravo!
Moondog Dozier 2006-02-21 ch 1,	abuseThis is marvelous. So nostalgically formed, and yet so vividly in the present. So many wonderful lines and phrases in this, it is too much to mention, but the overall work is commendable. The development and progression of this was excellent. Wonderfully well written.
Needa S 2006-02-17 ch 1,	abuseVery touching, it brought a tear to my eye. I often wonder where my old friend is, I haven't talked to her in years. Awesome write.
Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-02-12 ch 1,	abuseI dont know if its because I am just overly sensitive or because this brought memories back to me or because I am a sap; but this piece made me tear up. This is definatly one of my favorite pieces of yours aslan. Your imagery always gets to me. "never mind if mine was a peppermint tongue and hers was butterscotch" I loved this line. I guess because it reminded me of a candy box my friend and I shared every summer when we took a road trip. We would stock it with our favorite candy. Anyways... this is a great piece of work. Bravo to you once more for making me smile and cry lol.
Grey eyed oblivion 2006-01-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was such a sweet poem :) Good job!
elvenstorm 2006-01-14 ch 1,	abuseOh this is so wonderful. So nostalgic but in a beautiful way. Well done x
citrus scented 2006-01-13 ch 1,	abusewow... this is just almost so touching it feels too private too read. its really a beautiful and moving piece, the ending is just tragically moving. really emotional, just a wonderful piece. i can relate in so many ways its painful these type of things.
from beneath the bell jar 2006-01-13 ch 1,	abuseOnce again you've nailed the feeling. Beautiful.
hoowdoideletethisaccount 2006-01-06 ch 1,	abuseThis is a sweet, sad little piece full of wistfulness. The pinky line about the almost-kiss made me laugh. So cute. The twin-moon baby part was too swwet. This has such a little-girl feel, so much bubblegum and hopefulness, and yet the ending is sad. I'm so afriad of this- of life, and busyness, and miles tearing me apart from the people I love. It's so easily done, and so hard to repair. Friendships are so easy when you're little girls...
FeelBeyondWords 2006-01-05 ch 1,	abuse"When the miles and the time were still working out their excuses and phone calls turned into once-a-year questionnaires." -- isn't it so true? I loved the way you wrote it like a story, with certain events, even used names, but it's still everyone's experience. You captured it perfectly. Amazing work.
Fearless Soul 2006-01-05 ch 1,	abuse...It scares me mainly because i've thought about this several times before. Terrifying how you've managed to nail it again. Simply perfect.
agirlnamed-aly 2006-01-04 ch 1,	abuseI know this might sound utterly pathetic - but I actually cried reading this. Why? Because my old best friend and I used to have matching mood rings, and I was with her the first time she got her ears pierced. And yes, I held her hand. The nostalgia just sort of hit me like a wave I didn't expect. (I guess it just made me really sad since we're not friends anymore.) Anyway, this was lovely as usual. The intricate detail you used made it personal and heartwarming, and - like how I felt - nostalgic. xoxo Aly
thursdays and rain 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abusethat was just beautiful ♥
mezzie 2006-01-03 ch 1,	abusecompletely heart touched by this.why do things always change in the strangest most unnatural of ways and somehow become the new natural state of things... mezzie

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