You've used the form well and presented a great deal of social wisdom in the process. Well written.

interesting poem. i like the part about trust being fragile. good job with this.

Shadowhound

I like how the poem climaxes in lenght of the lines and comes back to where it came from with the "withheld" line. The poem is almost like a drop of water hiting a larger body and reverberating back to what it once was. Good job!