|Reviews for Withheld|
| Moondog Dozier 4/18/06 . chapter 1
You've used the form well and presented a great deal of social wisdom in the process. Well written.
| Shadowhound 1/18/06 . chapter 1
interesting poem. i like the part about trust being fragile. good job with this.
| Andrew Bowman 1/2/06 . chapter 1
I like how the poem climaxes in lenght of the lines and comes back to where it came from with the "withheld" line. The poem is almost like a drop of water hiting a larger body and reverberating back to what it once was. Good job!