so sweet and true, good work

So simple, so true, and you almost made me cry. I loved it.

Wish I still had that(the faith I mean)...Anyway I think you try to describe more of the emotion he makes you feel rather then what he is to you. Does that make sense? All that said not a bad poem, you should write a poem and try doing one of those tract things...You know where people like cut a corner of a dollar bill off, and tape it to a piece of paper that has a bunch of bible verses, then put it on the ground. For a "dollar" I am sure someone will pick it up, as long as it is convincing. Really though you should practice your faith as much as possible, especially since you are so enthusiastic about it(THAT'S GREAT). And if you are shy thats not a bad way to do it.

Pretty, meaningful, and so true. I really liked it. Definately on my favorites list.

To group the way you want: place cursor at the beg. of the second line and combine the second and first together, cursor in the middle. then hit shift followed by enter...and repeat it the way you want it. Hope it helps...nice poem. God bless, silent.