This poem is really beautiful. It makes me miss living in a place where there is snow in the winter. This gives a really beautiful feeling and I especially like this part:

"Sea foam colored grave embraceIs framed across this earthen faceForever and tonight’s to lateA cerebral wind is winter fate"

It paints a beautiful picture.

I only have one critique...TieDye is spelled Tie-Dye...lol, I know I know...those lame little fucking -'s...That's not really a big deal though.

ANyway, I love the beginning. There's alot of really beautiful lines in this poem, I can't even begin to list them all off. The whole poem really flows, and truly is beautiful. I really like the feeling it gives off.

ANNA