 firebenderZula 2006-04-09 . chapter 1A good ode to read at a funeral. |
 waitandhope 2006-03-18 . chapter 1Very pretty. I like it a lot, but I'm sorry about your grandmother. |
 jessie 2006-02-18 . chapter 1 i like that poem, its nice. you are so thoughtful to everyone. i hope you will be fine at the funeral |
 Mikki Amboree 2006-01-07 . chapter 1Oh wow, that's very beautiful and very well written. You're one outstanding kid. *hugs* Sorry for your loss. Write on! |
 lostandwandering 2006-01-02 . chapter 1on the first note, this a well written emotion poem. on the second note... about this time three years ago my grandma died also. i know the pain. i know the hurt. i know. would you review some of my poems? keep writing. |
 Jezsh 2006-01-02 . chapter 1imagining it being read, I was really touched. Its honesty shines through and the emotions are raw and beautiful. |
 philod 2006-01-02 . chapter 1beautifully written...reminds me of my own grandmother.. |