 daughterofmusic 2008-01-20 . chapter 1I just want to eat it up! I love it! It's so descriptive! "It is cold, but not *cold*..."
~Music
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 Beks 2006-12-06 . chapter 1 I've read this before, I believe you showed it to me about a year ago. But I don't think I ever told you what I thought of it. So, I just wanted to tell you that I love it and I can't think of why I haven't told you that before. It reminds me of something I've done before or felt before but I can't think of what. It makes me feel peaceful AND I'm at school. I also really love candles, I've taken to lighting them in my room and reading in my reading corner (and I haven't forgotten to blow them out afterards either! Ichie gets woried and annoyed when I do it though...can't think of why). Anyways, great job once again! |
 Tanwen-Whitefire 2006-01-02 . chapter 1i hate tramping in the snow. course, that's cause i never wear the proper footwear, and end up with a booter, more often than not.
damn runners. i need to buy myself some boots. very cool though. i like the candle. i love candles, and i can totally feel just being in a small sphere of light. i always do that. light five or six candles and read a book or something... gods i'm a nerd. |
 Shang Warrior Phoenix 2006-01-02 . chapter 1i like this. i suppose i'll let you have creative license and get away with it. Great job as usual! |
 Jitterrue 2006-01-02 . chapter 1Nice use of vivid imagery. Some awkward phrasing but excellent capture of a moment. lovely. |
 D.L. Elizabeth 2006-01-02 . chapter 1It's soothing and reminds me of good places and people. Plus, I am a sucker for anything with candles. ^.^ |