"I’ll be there with you

Until the stars rain from the sky

In tears of orange flame

Until the sky falls from above

and end to it all"

-I love all these lines. This poem made me smile, I know what its like to have a friend like that, and to be one in return. It saddens me the pain the person is going through but everything should be okay as long as someone is there.

I love this one, it's so beautiful! I love the lines 'I'll be there with you, until the stars rain from the sky' Very cooL poem!

Much love, Rosanna.

Aww...that is really sweet... like self sacrifice for the other just to see them happy...ive been there... i know what you mean! i like this tons.

This is so touching and beautiful. I really like the way you've ended it. Great work, excellent poem! QueenVixta

Beautiful work, dear. I hope he reads this! *hug*

aww... its so heartfelt makes me feel like crying and smiling beautiful work

keep writing!

If you haven't already you should let the person this is to read it. It's beautiful and if he is in as much pain as this poem portrays he could use something small, just so he knows your there you know?