HEY!!
This story was awesome... and pretty damn funny aswell lol.
I'm gonna have a look at your toher stories now I think :)
Have a gd week!
BYE!!
x x x

It's written that Kiera isn't shocked that Duncan is "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed or persistent" but is shocked by the fact that he's still chasing after her even with the knowledge that she has a "fiance". But wouldn't that make him "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed [and] persistent"?
I don't want to get technical, but just something I noticed.
Great one-shot though, really enjoyed the mixes of humour and passion. =)

Hahah...so cute! :P

xx

Perfectly Flawless underwear and all. =) I Loved it. Can I have a Duncan?

Okay I read the story again and thought it was new...yes for a future doc, i dont have a good memory..but eh I'll hire Anne. Anyways if i thought it was new, it deserved a new review. So I wana try that lingere now if I can get that rxn! Awesome one shot!

schmexy. :D aww i wish this wasn't just a one shot though.

From outside the fitting room, a woman’s voice exclaimed, “I’ll buy whatever she was trying on!”

Priceless! LMFAO! My favorite part! I loved this alot, thank you :]

I want whatever she's trying on hahaha. i absolutely loved this, it was way to hilarious. Great oneshot!

Wow!... this was just wow! Loved Duncan even though he was arrogant. Kiera was adorable, with the fake fiance and everything. Boy was the smut hot... great job!

Aww...this gave me warm fuzzies...Duncan is so freaking sexy! :)

I absolutely adore this story and also some of your other one shots. I'm really too lazy to go and comment on all of them. Some of my other favorites are Hollywood Fairytale and My Favourite Mistake. Since I'm putting this one on my favorites; I decided to comment on it. I think you write a really well balanced story and I like the love scene you wrote. It was good without being overly graphic. I really enjoyed Duncan's persistence and how hard she tried to fight it. This was really cute and funny. I love to read your one shots over and over again, they are very good to read for escapism.

Haha, funny oneshot, yet cute as well

Oh, gosh! You are SUCH an amazing writer! I have been reading a lot of your short stories, and you are just about the best writer I have read the stories of in a very long time. It was just amazing! Keep it up! :)

The lady saying "I'll buy whatever she was trying on!" Is a nice touch! I liked this! :) You did an amazing job!

cute story! i absolutely loved it!