Bravissimo! Your poetry is soulful and heartfelt. Rock on!

Very beautiful and moving. The ending was great.

I love how it ends (I think I'm fascinated with endings). I got a little tired of reading "Tell me", but that is all strategic, so I understand. I love the:

"Tell me thatI made you,I built you out of clay,I shaped your perfect person,"

as well. That's my favorite stanza, 'cause sometimes I think I built the whole world out of clay... yeah, I'm weird, I know. (