lol, i'm afraid that 'kerb' is spelled 'curb'.
it went awfully fast, did it not? especially the ending.
didn't she JUST break up with her boyfriend?
it's too unrealistical, but hey.
this is fictionpress.
we're allowed to have flying monkeys in our stories.

i like the idea.

Love bf turned romance stories

Such a sweet fic, I loved it.

this is good... im adding it to my C2 Archive!

ke! i liked it!! sweet and silly. and it didnt go exceptionally fast...

this porridge is just right! :)

passionfruit yellow?? blech!

This was a great story too, I like your writing.

woah. i do NOT remember that ending! but i think its coz i only read about half...

very cliched. but still very good writing.

and she ended up with the good guy. esp liked the "dont want it to be a mistake" part. so sweet! =)

one shots work. u know-u get ideas-and like i said about ur other one-if u ever get bored-u have some great ideas for longer stories-this was really good-wish that something like that had happened for me-before i screwed it all up-sigh...great stuff-can't wait to read more of it...great one shot

~kara~

man do u know u left like 4 emails all atonce coz of all trhe stuff u uploaded?!?! hahaha... well i like this story its sweet and your writing has improved a lot! :) aww will... hahahaha