u dont like this story? you dont like this story? i love it... its corny and cute and i guess kind of romantic... its GREAT! im jealous, YOU SUCK! lol.

Woot! Another great story by one of my favorite fictionpress authors!

i remember this!

holy ** theyre rich!

"I saw the corner's of Jake's sister lift." jake sister has corners?

nice subjects *raises eyebrows* and careers too..

"Dude, it's uni! Who says university anymore?" ppl in america! they do!! phoebs and i were talking with my cuz [from america] and we sed mozzies and she was like huh? whats mozzie? and then later phoebs sed uni. and shes like uni? as in university? wierd...

*sputters* what! its meant to be a nice story!!1 that goes on for a while and THEN ends with jake and steve. [although i do like the ending...]

stevie really changed...at the beginning she was kinda shallow [what do i wear. unofficial gf..kinda stalkery...]and then she wasnt...and then at the end she was even smarter with all the books...

i totally love this! yes-cliched-but good...if u ever run out of chapter story ideas u could totally go back to this and make it a full length thing with this part like near the end...wow! what more can i say-soo good!

~Kara~

I like ur story. Gosh, Jake sounds hot! :D.

hey! ive read this before... without the ending. i prefer the other one with will coz i dont like the character so much in this, which shows how great u r at bringing out a characters personality! well done. its not crap!